its a pom and i want to now if its sounds good but please dont copy (its copyright because my dad put it in a book) ok it go like this.........oh before i do it, its called he gave me flowers and it will make you think cuz its deep.here it goes........
he gave me flowers today but it wasnt aspeacil day he yelled at me but he gave me flowers so he must be sorry.
he gave me flowers today but it wasnt a speacil day he pushed me but gave me flowers so he must be sorry.
he gave me flowers today but it wasnt a speacil day.it wasnt my birthday or mothers day,he kicked, punched beat and cut me on my back but he gave me flowers so he must be sorry.
he gave me flowers today and it WAS a speacil day, it was my funeral cause i stayed with him.
if yall have any inspring poems tell me and thell be putin abook with mines
Ok do yall think this sound good?
Good poem. Do you write a lot of poetry? This poem sounds A LOT like another one I heard some time back... http://www.tufffemme.com/WomensCauses/fl... and it is copyrighted. Check it out.
Please take this as constructive criticism and not an insult... Correct the spelling errors and it will be even better.
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