It has to have 5,6 or 7 stanzas and 4,5 or/and 6 lines. The poem "has to make sense" (every poem has sense but if it is surreal not most people understand as I talked to somebody and I know this)
This is the start:
Red flowers from a white painting
were falling on the noisy floor
sitting in a sanatorium.
- the rain was leaping
on the funeral window
without the light
it had some years ago.
Simple poem game?
Red flowers from a white painting
were falling on the noisy floor
sitting in a sanatorium.
- the rain was leaping
on the funeral window
without the light
it had some years ago.
He looks out of the blank window
And remembers a different time
A different world
When the bright colours danced
A glorious wave of frothy cheer
A dizzying dream of unberable sweetness
There was some years ago.
Yet how the times had changed
alone, on silent sentry
enveloped by this gloom
of sorrow manifest
clouded by foreboding.
bursting beams of light
break through in memories, long since past
but to be consumed once more
certainty encroaching
Reply:i get it...
Red flowers from a white painting
were falling on the noisy floor
sitting in a sanatorium.
-the rain was leaping
on the funeral window
without the light
it had some years ago.
The room was dark and quiet
the floor was really squeaky
every time i took a step
thee was more squeaks all
throughout the old smelly floor
that had been there some years ago.
Reply:I understand you want us to continue the poem, but I don't get the rest of it. Is one person supposed to contribute one stanza at a time? Anyway, here's a shot.
Red flowers from a white painting
were falling on the noisy floor
sitting in a sanatorium.
- the rain was leaping
on the funeral window
without the light
it had some years ago.
He looks out of the blank window
And remembers a different time
A different world
When the bright colours danced
A glorious wave of frothy cheer
A dizzying dream of unberable sweetness
There was some years ago.
Reply:i dont get it
make up
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